Please welcome multipublished author Lynne Griffin to Writer Unboxed today!
Lynne is the author of the novels Girl Sent Away (SixOneSeven Books), Sea Escape (Simon & Schuster) and Life Without Summer (St. Martin’s Press), and the non-fiction guides, Letâs Talk About it: Adolescent Mental Health (SixOneSeven Books) and Negotiation Generation (Penguin). In addition to teaching at GrubStreet, Lynne teaches in the graduate program of family studies at Wheelock College. She is the family life contributor for Bostonâs Fox Morning News and writes for Psychology Today. Her short fiction, essays, and articles have appeared in Slate, Brain, Child, Parenting, Scholastic Parent & Child, Psychology Today, The Writer, The Huffington Post, The Boston Globe, The Drum Literary Magazine, Parents, and more.
For more about Lynneâs work, visit her website.
Dying to Know, Afraid to Find Out: Building Tension in Fiction
No matter the narrative, we read to explore human behavior and the intricacies of social and emotional life. Good stories ask us to contemplate universal questions, like âAre we in control of our lives?â or âWill we be punished for our sins?â or âWhat do we need most in the world to feel whole, to be loved?â
I read Donna Tarttâs The Goldfinch to find out if Theo was ever held responsible for stealing the painting after surviving the terrorist attack in the museum. Yet mostly I read to learn how precious art might help or hinder the way a child grieves the loss of his mother.
I knew very little about displaced persons from Iran until I was introduced to the Behrani family in House of Sand and Fog by Andre Dubus III. I read this riveting novel of suspense because I needed to find out whether it would be Kathy or the Colonel who would win possession of the house in the California Hills. Except the more powerful reason I read was because the story asked me to imagine what it feels like to be someone forever at war with inequality and injustice. And to consider what I might be willing to do to hold onto the only place I had left to call my home.
The answers to existential questions in life donât come easy. And they shouldnât in fiction either. Compelling stories have the ability to draw us in. They challenge our present attitudes, often shifting our perspectives. To put it simply, there are no absolutes. As in The Goldfinch and in House of Sand and Fog, stealing is wrong until it isnât.
Well-crafted stories donât make difficult questions easier to answer, just easier to ponder. Itâs the writerâs job to raise questions readers want to grapple with, and we do it by creating tension on every page, working through the messy lives of complex characters. Exploiting every element of craft, the writer engages in a delicate dance of creating compelling story questions that put readers on edge while not confusing or frustrating them.
How do writers achieve the right level of tension?
Itâs this very discomfort over whatâs about to happen and what characters stand to lose that keeps readers turning pages. Without some sense that characters might fail (or in the absence of believable conflicts and something valuable at stake) we have no reason to care how things turn out for them. And when we no longer care, we no longer read.
If like me you believe all scenes must contain some level of tension, the question becomes: How can writers vary the types of conflict and raise the stakes sufficiently in order to hold readersâ attention? Kurt Vonnegut Jr. famously offered writers this advice, âMake your characters want something right away even if itâs only a glass of water.â
Story conflict centers on character wants and needs, and the obstacles he or she encounters in fulfillment of these. Whether it involves something big, like a character looking for love, or something small, like the quest for a soda to quench thirst, creating tension means making it a little harderâor a lot harderâfor your character to find an extraordinary lover or an ordinary can of Coke. Desires when thwarted force the reader to become invested in the story.
One way to figure out if youâve found the right level of tension in a scene is by tapping into how the character feels as he or she collides with obstacles, and your own feelings of discomfort as you write or edit the scene.
Each action and its subsequent complications ideally bring characters one step higher on an emotional ladder, making potential failure increasingly dangerous. For every win a character accumulates, for every victory achieved, something else should worsen.
Think Big Picture
Author Terry McMillan said, âI like to think of what happens to characters in good novels and stories as knotsâthings keep knotting up. And by the end of the storyâreaders see an unknotting of sorts. Not what you expect, not the easy answers you get on TV, not wash and wear philosophies, but a reproduction of believable, emotional experiences.â
The next time you sit with your work-in-progress, pause to make a list of the knots in your story. Ask yourself if theyâre interesting, fresh, authentic to the character. Have you tied plenty of simple knots like the clove hitch? And have you included at least a few constrictor knotsâthe kind of harsh knots that can be difficult if not impossible to untie once tightened.
Once you have knots, knots, and more knots, figure out whatâs at stake for your characters if certain of them get untangled and others donât. Remember to consider the knots readers will want to be untangled.
Focus on Little Particulars
Once youâve chosen a central conflict that matters to characters and readers alike, and youâve created a variety of knots to complicate the narrative, itâs time to channel Anton Chekhov who once urged writers, âto seize upon the little parÂticÂuÂlars, groupÂing them in such a way that, in readÂing, when you shut your eyes you get the picture.â
Itâs at the micro level, with careful word choice and thoughtful sentence construction, that writers create interesting frictionâand fiction. Letâs take a look at two novel excerpts.
âWe ate dinner one night at a dark Hunan restaurant in old Chinatown. I watched her close her eyes, I could feel the waves of her passion like perfume across the tea cups.â âJanet Fitch, White Oleander
âHow flat all sounds are at the seaside, flat and yet emphatic, like the sound of gunshots heard at a distance.â âJohn Banville, The Sea
Can you see the edginess and uncertainty in these examples? Are you asking yourself why one character sees âwaves of passion across teacupsâ while another character conjures gunshots at the seaside?Â Every word in every sentence is an opportunity to raise reader questions and to play with tension, to create anticipation, expectation, and anxiety. Itâs where the magic happens.
No worries, if youâve not yet nailed the right level of tension in your manuscript or in certain of your scenes. Remember, writing is revision. Whether you layer it in later or amplify whatâs already on the page, you should expect to revisit your work-in-progress many times over many months to get it right. This critical part of the revision process takes as long as it takes.
Tim OâBrien, author of The Things We Carried reminds us that, âThe goal any fiction writer has, no matter what the subject, is to hit the human heart and the tear ducts and the nape of the neck and to make a person feel something about what the characters are going through and to experience the moral paradoxes and struggles of being human.â
Think about the last time you were cast under a storyâs spell in the way OâBrien describes. What influence did big picture knots and micro-level tension have in keeping you turning pages? Share your favorite books and stories below so that we can enjoy that dying-to-know, afraid-to-find out feeling too.